Tervos's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Chaos World:The Bridge]

ehhh

There is a lot of work that needs to be done. While I appreciate that stop motion requires a LOT of frames and images, the work I see it needing is, first, the music. while it does continue, it stops mid-tune and restarts. Second, what's the plot here? I don't see any, any story, and have no idea what is being told. Fix these, and you will have something that will likely have more potential, and higher ratings.

MacBoxProductions responds:

You are right there is no plot.
but again this is a older post.

[DotWars]

It is indeed intriguing

While I do always enjoy people exploiting their artistic sides, I do strongly suggest that one develops their skill beyond...well, dots. While the concept is different than what I am used to seeing, it still left me wondering who the green dot was, why he was where he was, where he was, and overall, it left nearly everything to the imagination. I can not give a score to this that I feel would be decent.

ob3yyy responds:

Yeah. I do plan on developing a story to this. I'm sorry you feel my skills go as far as dots. That's why I tried to add a few things, such as a gatling gun, a smoking ash tray (which is easy to miss), rotation fan, swinging light, etc.

[TwoKinds Drawings]

The Comic is indeed good but...

Well, I can certainly see that you have a rather decent ability to see something and produce a very similar likeness to what you are seeing. This is a good trait to have when drawing in artwork. While I will also agree that this piece is not likely to stay on newgrounds, I strongly suggest you continue with your artwork, as it will only get better with time.

IKanzAnimate responds:

Will be taking this down soon no worries.
putting it on an art forum instead.

[Badger goes to some club]

graphically intense my ass

ok first, there is nothing that is graphically intense. second, i recall a submission that had very same characters. it was prolly you. it got blammed as well as i recall. um, also, i think it would be better if there was some more action, i mean, more that the animal (hamster?) jumping toward the screen and rocking back and forth...it needs more. change this, and try again, i can see some potential with this, but it needs improvement. good luck.

FatBadger responds:

its fuckign flash 8 graphicly intense!! And my submissions didnt get blammed check fucking totw.

[Stop Motion Soldiers]

WOW

That was very VERY smooth stop-motion animation! i liked it! keep this shit up!

Kodesmack responds:

Thanks. I will once i learn to fix my camera so that red line wont show up o.O

[the acopalyspes]

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it might be cool if i was stoned, it looks like a stoner movie. otherwise. not good.

sdfgb32456rgsdf responds:

but its not a stoner movie